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My man, I get the things bad, I ain't even read a second of it, but you cannot be fr adding 'bad fan service', you are just a degenerate if you use the quality of the fan service as a reason

@Lemon Cherry my man, youre too stupid to understand what im saying fr fr no cap!

every manga has fan service. people like attractive characters, and that stuff sells. good authors will make it super subtle. bad authors will hit you over the head with constant fan service to try to hide the fact that they cant write a decent plot to save their lives. this author is egregious and aggressive with turning every single female character into nothing more than fan service. even if the rest of the manhua was good, it would still be borderline unreadable due to this fact alone. this is what bad fan service means

First off, no need to write so aggressively—your keyboard deserves a little love too, you know! Then, doesn’t it occur to you that this might just be a translation issue or a simple typo? Is it really that critical to nitpick something so common in post-apocalyptic settings when we all understand it’s about volume, not surface area?

As for saying the author lives in a "mommy basement," I’d bet it’s more likely you’re the one in a cave. The story takes place in China, where some cities are massively overpopulated, so gathering 5,000 people that quickly isn’t exactly far-fetched.

Oh, and about his ex? She hasn’t yet tried to kill him again, but it’s pretty obvious that’s just her style—it’s bound to happen sooner or later. I mean, her first reaction to call him trash instead of being shocked at her boyfriend’s actions says it all, doesn’t it?

That said, yeah, I’ll admit—the story overall is pretty bad. But hey, let’s try to critique with a touch more finesse, shall we?